Improve readability of the text defining key ID comparison (#423)

ddorwin · web-flow · commit e055347bb803 · 2017-06-15T15:15:31.000-07:00
diff --git a/encrypted-media-respec.html b/encrypted-media-respec.html
@@ -2137,10 +2137,11 @@ <h2>Methods</h2>
             </p>
             <p>
               The value pairs to iterate over are a snapshot of the set of pairs formed from the <a def-id="key-id"></a> and
-              associated <a>MediaKeyStatus</a> value for all <a href="#known-key">known keys</a>, sorted by <a def-id="key-id"></a>,
-              where for Key IDs <var>A</var> and <var>B</var>, of lengths <var>n</var> and <var>m</var> respectively, with <var>n</var> &lt;= <var>m</var>, then we
-              define <var>A</var> &lt; <var>B</var> if and only if the <var>n</var> octets of <var>A</var> are less in lexicographical
-              order than the first <var>n</var> octets of <var>B</var> or those octets are equal and <var>n</var> &lt; <var>m</var>.
+              associated <a>MediaKeyStatus</a> value for all <a href="#known-key">known keys</a>, sorted by <a def-id="key-id"></a>.
+              Key IDs are compared as follows:
+              For key IDs <var>A</var> of length <var>m</var> and <var>B</var> of length <var>n</var>, assigned such that <var>m</var> &lt;= <var>n</var>,
+              let <var>A</var> &lt; <var>B</var> if and only if the <var>m</var> octets of <var>A</var> are less in lexicographical
+              order than the first <var>m</var> octets of <var>B</var> or those octets are equal and <var>m</var> &lt; <var>n</var>.
             </p>
           </section>
         </div>
@@ -2402,7 +2403,7 @@ <h4>Monitor for CDM State Changes</h4>
               <ol>
                 <li>
                   <p>
-                    Let <var>statuses</var> be a list of Key ID and <a>MediaKeyStatus</a> value pairs containing one pair for each key
+                    Let <var>statuses</var> be a list of key ID and <a>MediaKeyStatus</a> value pairs containing one pair for each key
                     <a href="#known-key">known</a> to <var>session</var>.
                   </p>
                 </li>
